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LOL I like how 2014 is in your tags.

I actually love this.
Like absolutely love this.
Very well done, only complaint is that I dislike the part from about 1:00 to 1:30.

Sorry I haven't reviewed anything of your recently, I've been kind of busy.

Jahn33 responds:

It's all good! Thank you!

Another amazing track from the person who inspired me to start writing music!!

I love the melody and the synths, hate the dissonance.

When I say hate the dissonance, I mean I think it's ruining the piece.

Saw a review you left on Pixel's page, so I thought I might give you a listen.

For homemade synths I guess I can't be too hard on it, not that the synths are bad, I just feel like they don't meld together like they should.

My biggest gripe about the piece is that it feels like there's too little going on; there's big pauses in the melody that I feel like shouldn't be there.

As far as chord agreeing goes, it's a trance piece, so I guess that the slight discord is intentional and adds into the idea that it was supposed to be trance, but I definitely felt like this was a drum and bass throughout despite that I feel like the synths weren't meant to be bases.

Overall not bad, but I think it could use a good bit of tweaking before the finished product.

So when I started listening to it I thought the discordant notes were a mistake, but into it it was clear that it was intentional. I really don't like that every chord has notes that don't agree with each other despite that likely being the point of the piece.

I also feel like it's really lacking some stuff, like there's moments where there's nothing going on where there should be something, more specifically after all of the shorter notes it feels like there should be some sound, atmospheric, bass, whatever, that belongs to cover the silence that is left.

It is catchy however, and I like you choice of synths.

I can't say that I'm a fan of the introduction, but the rest of the piece is pretty awesome. Great remix man! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing it, been really busy lately.

Jahn33 responds:

All good, happens to the best of us. Thanks though!

Pretty good.
I like a lot of the progressions, but as a whole package I guess it just isn't my cup of tea D:
Been thinking about starting to put voicing in my pieces :D

Jahn33 responds:

Awesome! I say go for it. Sorry it wasn't your cup of tea :(

My only complaint here is that the bass behind the main melody is a bit on the strong side, especially at the beginning, and the crashes around 1min are kind of on the high end, and loud, making them a bit unfavorable for me.

Other than that though, I really enjoyed the piece, fantastic job!
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